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Autumn

Autumn

A Poem by shallimarRose

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Summer winds have blown away

 

the beachy balms of yesterday

 

 seasons see her subtle change

 

 tiny friends must re-arrange

 

to keep them safe 


impending cold

 

they store up food

 

it's worth in gold

 

the hours

 

they grow shorter now

 

as summer takes her final bow

 

the colored leaves show their array

 

in crimson piles 

 

 the children play

 

and chimneys swept

 

begin their light

 

to keep all warm

 

this autumn night

 

appreciate her while she here

 

she falls away and disppears

 

before you know it

 

so it seems

 

giving way to winter dreams

 

so on and so on , so it goes

 

from warmth of spring

 

to crystal snows

 

be sure to cherish one and all

 

Spring, summer, Winter, & Fall

 

 


bj smith aka shallimarRose 

 


© 2013 shallimarRose



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Beautifully done Shallimar. This is a finely written Autumn poem that utilizes the many elements of the season.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I love the rhythm! The font color and picture is a nice touch to it too. Well done! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

3 Years Ago

thank you Abbie... Im glad you enjoyed.. Rose
Your writing is really smooth. I enjoy the changing of the seasons within this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


shallimarRose

3 Years Ago

Thank you Rose... xo also a Rose here...
A delightful nature themed poem, a pleasure to read & review !

Posted 4 Years Ago


shallimarRose

3 Years Ago

thank you very much Tom.. xo
This is a splendid seasonal piece of writing, loved it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

4 Years Ago

Mark thank you for the read and the friend request.. I have added you to my list.. shallimarRose
om i loves this great piece if writing and i enjoyed mostly the rhythm

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

4 Years Ago

Thank you Latifa I am pleased you enjoyed.. I write mostly rhyme.. Rose
A delightful read with a beautiful soft flow and perfect rhyme. You take us through a slide show of wonderful images.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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shallimarRose
shallimarRose

F W, WA



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I am a singer, writer, poet, dreamer, believer..... I am an unconventional poet who has been writing rhyme since the age of five. I enjoy all styles of poetry. I write by ear not syllable count .. more..

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