Just Move On

What we had, is over.
I've moved on and found some one new.
I've realized that we're apart.
Wake up from your dream and realize that too.

You and I had something going,
But you screwed it up with your ways.
Now you can be cold and lonely,
As you live out the rest of your days

I no longer have feelings for you.
And if you don't feel the same thing for me,
Then that's your own fault.
It's time you came back to reality.

Forget about us gettin back together.
I'm not going through that again.
I'm finally happy with my life
Seems like this time, you won't win.

Reviews

[Marienel aka ''TWEETY''..]

oh...You know what? You remind me of my previous relationship... It feels like dying... I cant accept the fact that he left me broken-hearted... Nice piece... I can relate... Very effective... Good job

[Michael X]

this isnt bad, and the rhymes are well suited, but i feel the form is out of place, if you could devise this into a letter form and remove some of the over punctuation, the effort could really accentuate
the artful effect you are going for, imo, as it read nows, really blocky and short sentenced, kinda hard.
but the talent is definitely there, keep up the great work.