Unfaithful Friends.

Friends,

The biggest but the easiest responsibility,

Some come, stay and love,

Some come, stay, love and disappear,

While the rest come, stay and hate forever.

You cry of tears all day and all night,

Cry of tears for those friends whom you thought would stay forever,

Lay by your side,

Hide behind your smile,

and cry behind your tears,

Those friends make you cry of tears all day and all night.

Those friends are the unfaithful friends,

Those friends are the reason why you don't have faith in the ones who try to win over your smile,

They would die to see the slightest smile on your face,

But kill the person who made you cry.

Unfaithful and faithful friends are just titles until someone comes and proves it to you,

It is the love for faith and the hate for fake you give after the so called titles.

Keep smiling. :)

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Very true I have lost some I knew as friends my
whole life and we are no longer friends they changed
I never did I was the same loving caring soul one I knew
since I was a baby and she Just wasn't the same as we were
as children and didn't treat me right. so this really spoke to me happens to us all.

I have one that I am still friends with she's like a sister another
was there for me when I was made fun of as a child and we are still friends
another one she died young at 28 I still miss her but there is one's that will
stay through thick and thin and one's that are fake will leave and some Just
change and grow apart I have maybe 5 good friends Rania would be the 6th one that
we lost she was like a sister to me. I hope you find some that are good. I had some that lived
here in Georgia that I thought they were my friends but they were lying about who they were and used me so I am happy with the one's I already have Sonya, Raina, Jenny, Chris, Jamie, Jenny/ I have 2 friends named Jenny. the good one's will come when we don't know it. Nice work. blessings

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. I'm sure these friends will be by your side. You're so sweet and charming. (:

[Zahra]

Faithful friends as truly a blessing. Nicely written

[Simran Kewlani]

True. Thank you. (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

I have known true friendship and it is a thing of beauty .It is selfless and honest and always there for you.Nicely penned Simran :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Vidya. (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[KittyVenus]

this touched my heart in so many ways that my heart cried. so true.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Emokid. This poems means a lot to me, and I'm glad that people have liked it. (:

[xDalliance]

"Unfaithful and faithful friends are just titles until someone comes and proves it to you"
So true, this poem speaks volumes. Your poems are so well expressed, they become the story of the person reading them. Again, another amazing one! :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. Not as good as yours. (:

[xDalliance]

Hahaha that is no where near the truth. Remember, Feelings are more important?

[Frieda P]

Reminds me of that quote “People come into your life for a reason, a season, or a lifetime"...whatever time spent with them, we're lucky if they leave us with a lesson, or footprints upon our heart. Very nicely pen'd Simran. :-)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Frieda. They sure do. Some just teach us a lesson that lasts a life time.(:

[Frieda P]

You're too smart for your knickers kiddo. ;-) My pleasure....

[Simran Kewlani]

Haha! Thank you Frieda. I realized that went I wrote my first poem. (:

[Jack...]

Now this one tocuhed me and hit so very hard to home. Your words today speak so many truths...unfortunately and fortunately alike. It has been said we only end up with one or two very good friends in our lives...hopefully you have found yours.

This nails it:

Some come, stay and love,
Some come, stay, love and disappear,
While the rest come, stay and hate forever.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Jack. I'm not sure yet that the friends I have will last forever. Let's give it some time. (:

[Sami Khalil]

We have to check the reality of unfaithful friends. They can be the adversaries among us...Bravo.........

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................