Once, Twice...?

I seriously don't know.

I'm gonna say it once,

Or maybe twice,

The rain will eventually cease,

Giving you the shine.

Author's Note

Can somebody tell me what that means. I'm actually confused why I wrote it. Sorry.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my! .. certainly you know at the least the inspiration that produced this expression .. for me when the muse hits and the words flow ..if i finish and say "i don't know" ;) then it may help to put it in a disciplined form .. maybe two haiku or a couplet for each line .. not saying you should change this in any way .. but if you have a need to understand yourself better .. try those things ..
as is i ken a lot of angst .. it seems noteworthy that when rains stop another is given something better .. i would say that let the floods rain down on the protagonist; and on the innocent heart .. let the sun shine ..
E.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you for reading, Einstein. I don't write Haiku, I don't know how to write Haiku. :)

[Einstein Noodle]

they are not hard .. and lots of fun .. if you google it .. you may find haiku are a nice part of a writers arsenal ;)

[Simran Kewlani]

I'll check it out. :)

[anne]

may be the sadness will soon come to end bringing smiles..it rhythms well and is beautiful..:))

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. :)

[xDalliance]

Hah, love this snippet. Maybe you can continue, or keep it short. Either way, it's simple. Simple really reflects you.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you! I'm sooo glad that you're back here. Start posting your writings, woman. I need some inspiration.

[Terrence Chang]

It means that every sadness has to end. The cries has to dry and give you a smile. Every emotion has to break.

[Simran Kewlani]

Oh wow. That is actually very accurate.
Thank you. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

what this spoke to me is that you will tolerate or indulge or warn once and twice but then the kindness shower shall cease and the wrath shall shine.
loved the poem!!!
:)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. :)

[KWP]

Oh nice - not once not twice simply nice - I love it - you wrote it so you can look back on your wise words in yeas to come - time and time again and you will inwardly smile just like I did Xx

[Simran Kewlani]

Haha thank you. Did you like it?

[KWP]

Every word i loved :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Oh my god! Hearing that from you, makes me so happy that you wouldn't even believe me. I'm so happy. Thank you! xx

[Mayank]

hey! you, yes you... why are you writing like me?
hahaha...
sometimes, you just have to write whatever your thought process is. I can interpret that you wanted to talk about the 'chances' or 'opportunity' you will not get them again and again, but if you get the chance and if you grabbed it, you will shine forever...

[Simran Kewlani]

Your writing may or may not be infectious. XD
Probably. Thanks for reading. :)

[Saddam]

It seem, You are just in love with someone.
Clever write in just few.

[Simran Kewlani]

I don't think so, SSADD. These just struck my mind. it does not necessarily have to be love.
What is your theory? How do you think this is regarding love?

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. You said a lot in the short poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Simran Kewlani]

You agree to Richard's statement or Confuser's?
Thanks for reading. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

More Richard than Confuser and you are welcome.

[Confuser]

Simran: It is funny and clever. I really like it!!!! I do - it made me smile. Thank you. Dale

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Dale. :)
I'm glad it made you smile.

[Confuser]

You did; Reading your bio; I need to read more poems of Emily Dickenson; I go from one to the other; I REALLY need to read more about writing poetry. You on the other hand have a talent that will only grow....Be happy! So good to hear from you. Thank you. Dale

[Simran Kewlani]

I just write when I have something going on in my head. I don't force myself to write because i haven't written in a long time. I may have improved because when I was 13, I wrote a new one almost everyday or alternate days. So when I started again at the age of 14, I only wrote when I knew it'd turn out to be good.
Thank you, Dale. :)

[Confuser]

That's Great Advise: Wise girl: I should be thankful when any poem of mine sounds "okay" and I've come to realize that: Other time, Oh my it's ridiculous. I'm going to re-read a story; I will let you tell me what you think; I need to go back to it; I really think it will be fun: but it will be more than a short story. Alright: Another Savant....another prodigy; hopefully I'll live long enough to see your books; Remember my son is 14; you can see him on f/b; he is my beautiful boy: You are beautiful; he is very shy with girls; but respectful and too young for all that, but he did have a girlfriend: Not that they did anything; just went to her dance recital with her parents; and school dance, but she called and was sick; so he came home instead of staying with his friends (thought that was good; he wanted to stay); bought her flowers with his own money; When he's about 30 he may be ready to really date!!! Bye sweet girl. Dale

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. :)

[R Smith]

its simple Simran, you're in love!!

[Simran Kewlani]

I don't know how it bends towards love. Could you please explain it to me? These lines suddenly struck my mind and I couldn't figure what they meant. Explain please. :)

[R Smith]

my review suddenly struck me so its like a sixth sense thing you wrote something that sounded like love to me, basically i reacted to your write without thinking just feeling, does that make it any clearer....i bet not lol, sorry Simran :)

[Simran Kewlani]

That's okay. :)