Safe Love.

Safe Love.

A Poem by Simran Kewlani
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It speaks for itself.

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In the darkness, her dead eyes looked for your light,
In the cold, her hands trembled in fright.

She lost hope and gave up trying,
Her body and mind; slowly dying.

In the midst of the darkness, a pale hand moved towards her slowly,
She raised her eyes and flinched; he picked her up carefully.

Through catastrophes and storms; he held her tight,
And for the rest, he never let her out of his sight.

25th August, 2015

© 2015 Simran Kewlani



Author's Note

Simran Kewlani
It's been long, guys. Sorry for being so inactive. I've been busy with college. I hope you guys like this.
I will soon start reviewing other poems as well.

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glad you have more time now Simran ... hope school went well ... i like the couplets ..i like the direct way you put me there in that room ... the comfort of being held is palpable ... i wonder if she is on her death bed ... probably not your intent but it seems to fit to me :) i am a retired nurse and i recall being told that one of human beings greatest fears is to die alone .. i see this prince Charming as Jesus bringing someone safely home ... again, i know, that is probably not your intent ;)
love can be a tough road ..can suck the life from anyone when not returned ... you leave the ending very open ..she is safe now ..but does she recover?? :)
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


There is no Safe love. We give our heart in hopes that it will never break. And that's the risk we all take

Posted 2 Years Ago


Simran Kewlani

2 Years Ago

Safe Love is in reference to the poem. He kept her safe. He was her love. Hence, Safe Love. :)
a lovely poem Simran, love and happiness come through in a very positive way, excellent work my friend :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Simran Kewlani

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Richard. :)
And for the rest, he never let her out of his sight.

Giving so much hope.
It is wonderful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Simran Kewlani

2 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
ooohhh it's nice to have that angel always there for you ... I do hope she manages to walk through the darkness to find the all enveloping light ...

how's college ? hope all is well X

Posted 2 Years Ago


Simran Kewlani

2 Years Ago

Thank you, KWP.
College is great. I'm having a lot of fun. :)
A hard journey ending with a positive ending.
"Through catastrophes and storms; he held her tight,
And for the rest, he never let her out of his sight."
I liked the above lines. Powerful emotion for the gift of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 2 Years Ago


Simran Kewlani

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Coyote. :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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