FIRE OF IRE

Just a poem

FIRE OF IRE

 

Anger is the only gall

That can kill you, dear pal

It will plunder your health

It will eat your glory in stealth

 

When it comes, observe closely

Hold on to your reserves firmly

Never fight it with your might

Nor crush its strings that are tight

 

Ask your gifted rational ken.

Why there is anger in men

In the answer there will be a weapon

To conquer the anger, the stoic demon!!!

 

Whatever maybe the object of your anger

Your anger will give it nothing but suffer

It may plunge deep into pain..

But your hope to change it is vain

 

Nobody’s anger can change anything.

Anger is a weird sort of thing

If you try to change anything by ire

You will burn yourself in ire’s fire

 

 

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

great poetry, I enjoyed the title especially..

[Tracie D'Angelo]

Very insightful poem. Yes, anger can be quite a character which can be tough to keep control of and can do damage to you and those around you. Nice work.

[Calypso]

Nice

[Desert Dreamer]

Acting out blindly in anger never leads to good, but anger can be useful...it is often our bodies message that something is wrong. To ignore our anger is also a bad thing, it will build up and that is when we act blindly. There have been many times in history when people have been abused by their leaders, and anger is necessary to begin a change, a revolution. Anger is necessary sometimes for us to leave a bad relationship, a bad job, etc...it is all about how we use our anger. Anger in itself is not a bad thing, but it doesn't justify treating others poorly. Good topic

[Nautili]

very wise.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

You have touched at a concern taht goes right at the heart of the human condition. COntrollign our anger is so critical to our holistic growth. Thanks Jennny for sharing. It is well done! I am not too sure what is "ire" smile!

vincent

[Angel Veselinov]

Very nice flow and rhymes. Great message. I really think anger can be used for positive too because it has such never ending burning rage which can power you up just as a redbull :) Great Read thanks for sharing

[Adelia Alighieri]

I think the rhyme worked brilliantly :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes your words are great wisdom. When anger overtake the conversation. No-one will win. Better to cool down and begin again. I like the examples in the poem. A perfect ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Huggy Bear]

Powerful and beautiful