Hey Freak!

Hey Freak!

A Poem by Akshita
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Such an arrogant poem!

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I know you don’t mean to be so,

Not born this way either!

Time’s made you what you are now;

But still, can’t you even try to be better?

 

Your excessively sweet words,

Your slimy, sloppy smile…

Your nasal voice, those stupid rings;

Get me all freaked out!

 

I want to stay away from you,

Don’t want to make you sad;

By my cutting cruel remarks…

They’re so hard to bear and I know that;

 

So honey, just leave me alone,

Let me have some peace!

I am tired of these stupid talks with you…

When you know, I am not the one you please!

 


© 2016 Akshita



Author's Note

Akshita
Believe me, it is really very irritating to have such people around you...all the time. Trying to please you in the silliest ways.

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Hey I know the feeling and thanks for sharing the poem it is a nice piece.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Yeah that's true....and your write it worked well..:)

Posted 6 Months Ago


I received the briefest message from you, so decided to check you out and you can write... well done.

Posted 7 Months Ago


I think it's amazing. Two thumbs up :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


"Time’s made you what you are now;
But still, can’t you even try to be better?"

these lines're remarkable, & philosophically quite realistic. may be, us today's youth be passing throu' same dilemma of life in a hope to reach peace that's no found around. time makes us bad, but what's more badass in that is... life. cos.. we ain't ev'n know what we're goin' throu' esp. when we're being fuzzed 'bout love-life. quite an interesting poetry.

ps.
it sucks when such weirdos oft. tryna please everyone for nothing but for something what they want so it's worth staying away from 'em not to hurt others but at least ... saving oneself from hurt.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Tell the truth. Lying just to make someone happy will just make both the person sad. Nice way to tell this message.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Akshita

11 Months Ago

Thanks!!! : )
Amazing peace very strong in how we are treasure my some.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Akshita

11 Months Ago

Thanks!!
Raylene

11 Months Ago

Anytime my friend
Great Piece! Reminds me of many people i know !

Posted 11 Months Ago


Akshita

11 Months Ago

Thank you!
Straight to the face. I feel I can connect with your thoughts. Really well done. A Real PipeBomb.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Akshita

11 Months Ago

Thanks a lot for your review!!!!
The bluntness of this piece is what always try to achieve in my own writing, I really got the feeling I was in your head for this one

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on August 23, 2016
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Akshita
Akshita

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