The Day i Dream For...

The day i dream for is a day which is... nice, in a word.

i dream of a day where no one fights, 

no one cry's, 

and a day where no one dies, except those whom i want to rip their heads,

from their disgusting, hateful, shameful bodies.

that day which i dream will be the best.

I dream of a day where you can just enjoy what the Earth has to offer,

no trees are being burnt alive,

no power plants emitting hurtful fumes,

and a day where no creature dies, except for those that just get on your skin,

and kills you with a bite. just no one likes them.

that day which i dream will be the best.

My dream day is a day where i can relax, go out with my friends and have a good time.

not a day when I'm stuck at home, all alone, except for a brother, whom i hate the living guts out of.

when i say i hate, i mean hate.

the world and human creation is better off with out him.

that day which i dream will be the best.

My dream day will not be a reality but a living nightmare,

a nightmare which i can't wake up from, and with all the thing i hate,

just picking at me, piece by piece,

until i can't take it anymore and just give up.

that day which i dream will be the best.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

That would be great, but some people know this will happen someday. Especially Jehovah's Witnesses because that is what I am. In the Bible it does say that Paradise will come. You can delete this if you want. I am just stating it because I am a Jehovah's Witness. Thanks for sharing though.

[soniix]

thanks u guys... your comments and suggestions really help :P

[Nancy S.]

Filled with the emotion of your words, I flash back to moments of such ire in my soul... If creative mind is the root to this most vivid agony and sort after justice, then I tip my hat to the poet for a rendering so true to your muse....
If this is a cathartic write, which my writer's soul whispers to my heart that it just might be, then I am in awe of your courage and your many talents, and I cast off in your direction a virtual hug to say, Brava child, Brava...

[Mia]

Wow, that would be great to have in real life! Great job!

[Mia]

Wow, that would be great to have in real life! Great job!

[Liz-z]

Wow, what a nice dream... you express a lot of hate, and wish-fullness, really liked it. Something personally you hope for!
It was excellent and it's comedy made it even better!
Bravo! ^>^