what happened?

the only time i was happy is when i thought you loved me.

i loved your deep blue eyes which stunned my heart, 

i loved your hair which you can only pull off with your smile,

i loved your smile that made my smile shine.

the only time i was happy when i thought i had the best family ever.

i had fun when we all went out places,

i had fun playing games and i always got the easy way out,

i had fun sitting close to each other when it was cold.

i'm happy when i dream of days to come, 

and wonder what if?, and if i had a wish?

my smile had fallen off,

off from forgetting what it is.

i have no feeling of love anymore because i don't remember what it feels like.

how it touches, thinks, feels,smells.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

This piece leaves a sadness and loneliness in the heart. I felt that the words in the beginning were spoken loud. While the ink flowed towards the end, the voice got smaller and smaller...as one's thoughts of the past became almost to painful to ponder.

Really good word choices and imagery!
Great Ink!
Wolfie