Happiness

Her world is crumbling .

A girl who has every thing yet has nothing, why?
She has toys, lots of clothes and anything with a snap of an finger.
She has many friends but always feels alone. So why is she so empty?
She can get anything in the world but wants nothing.she has an empty space in her heart that can't be fixed with money, status or gold.
Her mother, father and her brother say money can by happiness but thier all wrong.
She asked them to give the thing they dont really need away to others that need it.But her family's full of greedand its to late to help them change back the darkness has filled their heart and soul and now when they died they will burn in hell.

Author's Note

Please ignore my grammar . And I hope y'all like it.

Reviews

[PSYCHO-LOVE]

No I think its ok well thats what happends to stupid people ^v^

[747]

Some spelling issues aside, I think this is a great piece that really shows Money cannot get you fulfillment in life.
It took a bit of an unexpected turn at the end, perhaps a little harsh. Still a nice piece though.

[PSYCHO-LOVE]

thank you dark waters^.^ *_*

[Dark Waters]

I like the first line a lot, and I like how you wrote about greed *thumbs up* ^.^