For You

I might be happy with the title now, but we'll see. A song about love inspired by my two friends getting married.

I look down into your eyes

To find the place where you hide away

You see me there and open up

But to the rest the door is shut instead

 

Your pain falls in your tears

But can't wash away your fears from you

I can't imagine what it's like

But I can try to make it right again

 

Now save yourself in my arms

I will protect you from all harm

You're the only love that I know

All my love I will bestow on you

 

Come what may, come whatever

Know that I will love you forever

You've become my everything

You've become my beautiful

 

I've found the love you've thrown away

I'm here now, I'm here to say for you

I'll live my life just for you

I'll give all I have to you and more

 

And when we kiss I forget the past

I know that our love will last always

So dance with me through endless time

And promise you'll be forever mine my love

 

Now save yourself in my arms

I will protect you from all harm

You're the only love that I know

All my love I will bestow on you

 

Come what may, come whatever

Know that I will love you forever

You've become my everything

You've become my beautiful

Reviews

[Vanessa]

This was capturing (I know, what an overused word) but it was. I feel, for some reason, that I can relate to it.
Idon't even know how, butI feel like I can.
Anyhow, you did a nice job. I like it.... a lot.
And it actually does rhyme insomeplaces, unlike most poetry these days.
Long ago, poetry had an obligation to rhyme. And then,with time I supose, it just mostly didn't rhyme anymore. But, who's to say it has to or doesn not?
Great job either way.
Keep it up.

[Maya]

sweet! i like how you've rhymed but also added little words to the ends, so its got a beat but theres a little twist. great job! lovely