JP/SM

11-28-2010

Her name was of the sun,
Her face shown clear as day
Her mind was of loving only one,
Her lips could simply say
His name was of the moon,
His eyes were gold and blue
His voice would make her swoon,
His heart was fairly new
Her smile lit up his face,
Her scent made him desire
Her heart was in a race,
Her eyes burned like a pyre
His connection to her was beautiful,
Her love for him was epic
His life was full of fun and not dull,
Her mind now plays no tricks
They are a couple which lays together,
They are the tragedy of this modern day
They are holding one another forever,
They are Romeo and Juliet with a dash of Bonnie and Clyde so they say
Together they are fearless,
Together they can raise hell
Together their love cleans up anything considered within their minds a mess,
Together they could even show you an ocean and a bridge to which they shall sell
When you cross their path,
Know that they are playing a role
These two lovers did the math,
They are pure mates of the soul.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good tale of two who found each other and became a strong pair. I like the statements in this poem.
"Her smile lit up his face,
Her scent made him desire
Her heart was in a race,
Her eyes burned like a pyre"
Amazing words in this outstanding poem.
Coyote

[deeps]

wonderful write

[Hello, Goodbye]

Good resolute content.. with interesting imagery..

[Art]

I like this one Stacey...

an expressive view of one loving another...

nothing like love huh...

nice thoughts though poetry