when your life is wasted

ok so i was on Miley Cyrus's myspace (i know) and this girl commented her and told her shes "awsome" because of "all shes done" and her life is "wasted" because shes sixteen and hasn't done anyhting important like you have&qu

all the presures of this world,

telling you, your not worth it

if your not famous or on TV

you haven't done anything important

 

when your life has been wasted

and your only sixteen

what does that say about

the culture that we live in

 

and all we seem to want to hear about

is "love" and what to wear

it's pathetic

when there is so much more out there.

 

to care about the needy

not the greedy,

to stop spending so much time on

how to do your hair.

 

we're all guillty of doing all these things

even me.

this mysterious working of our minds

blows me away...

Author's Note

ignore grammer.

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

I am so glad that you care about
the real things of this world

Most people don't even care for the needy
I am glad you have a great heart

Nice job!

Orlando M

[Suzanne Deakins]

I like the idea of using trigger words like wasted. This has some real good ideas that could be intensified. You make the reader a bit uncomfortable and that is gooooooood !

[J.benjamin Rose]

Dig the poem homeskillet.
That's exactly how I'm feelin'
yeesh,
thanx for bringing my depression to new lows.

I really enjoyed it.

[Mysty Rayn]

Veryy true how we are all sucked into the "hollywood" life. Thank you for putting it down.