i will not write other than you

i don't want to write about anything

other than your lips and the way i watch them

when you sing (they are after all, my darling dear,

the place i kiss you most but not only)

 

it seems a page wasted

to proclaim anything other than

your peach pit knot bivouacked within

my heart (it is a lovely weight

i joyfully bear, my darling)

 

i will not write of anything

other than your blazing eyes -

they reveal truth where there is none declared

and discover me

 

if your pervasive eyes should

ever cease to love my writes

i fear i will scrap all i have ever created

and drown my poems in the bottom of the ocean

and strangle my pens and

break off all of my fingers

and burn them with the fuel

of the ink i have wasted

 

no energy is worth more

from the strain of my desperate fingers

than descrambling the visceral mosaics of my love

and canonizing them into volumes

of verse for you to reread before

casting your eyes off to sleep

every

single

night,

my darling

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so romantically sweet my dear :)

[Mollie Fitzner]

Yes! Not much of a comment, I fear, but I did enjoy this, Silverton!

[m.s.early]

(: thank you Mollie :)

[Jack...]

X, I think we have a new romantic poet on our site and it is you. this is wonderful my friend. Your words breathe love and beauty into this place. Very well done...nice one my friend.

[m.s.early]

(: whoa Jack! That's a heavy compliment coming from you. I take it to heart. Thank you so much. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh!

Such a pleasant surprise to read you, Xavier!
My first read and I'm hooked! Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat? lol

I am a strong believer in Romance, and this shines of torment, lust, beauty,
and above all, it spells passion through and through!

I must say, I'm impressed! :)

[m.s.early]

(: thank you so much for your kind review! i'm so glad you enjoyed :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I did.. it was lovely to experience... :)

[Frieda P]

A different kind of love poem, a little bit quirky, and a lot of sentiment.

descrambling the visceral mosaics of my love
and canonizing them into volumes
of verse for you to reread

Love that xavier...outstanding read.

[m.s.early]

(: thank you so much Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, I wish I would have pen'd that fourth stanza myself, muchly enjoyed :-)

[s y e]

This is perfect. I loved it and the message you've given off in this one.

[m.s.early]

(: thank you noodle :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Ahh, the kind of write that would send me screaming in terror at the moment, for fear the writer would break my heart. How positively gorgeous. Sorry I am not in the frame of mind to let it swoon me.:)

[m.s.early]

(: thank you kl. things will change. trust takes longer than the heart to heal. :)

[Ruth]

Good heavens, this is sensational. The imagery, wording, flow, the sheer depth of adoration, the need to be read, seen, felt, touched by the reflection of the observer that is admired. Wow...took my breath away! x

[m.s.early]

(: thank you poppy :)

[DIVYA]

Yiu have truly expressed the ultimate heights and depths of love. The final two verses are really very impressive and heartfelt. Great expression of love!

[m.s.early]

(: thank you divya :)