Old Soul

Old Soul

A Poem by theshygirl

he is so young but yet his choice of words intrigue me

Old soul

You are so young but yet you say so many intrigueing words.
Searching for tranquility as you stare at the
Emptiness that you preferred  

Thinking about such delightfull things
Thinking about things you shouldnot be thinking of.
Thinking of these things which keeps you from closing those sleepy eyes.

You say you're okay but your wave of sound has too many peaks
You are an old soul who knows pain and distress.
But you can't hide those sleepy eyes forever.
You are an old soul and age is just a number right.
It's alright so don't fight it
Call it a night.

© 2016 theshygirl

Author's Note

please let me know what you think about it also if you notice some grammar or spelling mistakes just tell me i would like to improve my writing

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All I got to say is that I feel like that old soul in my Fifty Eight years Old Soul indeed.

Posted 2 Years Ago

an old soul trapped in a young mans body ! or maybe just a wie soul. enjoyed the write

Posted 2 Years Ago

I really love this poem!! It shows that people who are young can still be into old things without having to be old. It's a very well written poem!!

Posted 2 Years Ago

Hi! Another nice poem! It truly speaks about our ancient soul and the wisdom it possessed. I just noticed a typo, just a minute detail:

- '...many intrigueing words.' Should be - '...many INTRIGUING words.

Just a small error, however, you're doing great. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago

Another good peice good job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 Years Ago

Thanks dearr

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5 Reviews
Added on January 19, 2016
Last Updated on January 19, 2016
Tags: love, teen



just a girl who likes to express her self and her ideas about the world in poetry ;) more..

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