World Free of Haters

I had a nice time writing this.

I’m going to keep spreading this message even if it kills me

To stop is something I’m refusing

Put your head up, open your eyes

Don’t be afraid to be you, wear no disguise

Keep climbing till you reach the top

Don’t worry about the haters cause for them it’s going to be a scary drop

This is for you and me

It’s ok to live out your dreams

Disagree?

It's ok feel free

I may be only sixteen but I’ve learned a lot in this life

One thing I learned is life is full of strife

But you have to learn and push through it

This is your life; you’re the one who controls it

It doesn’t matter what you look like

You're a person and every person has a light

It doesn’t matter what you you’ve been through

It’s irrelevant what you see when you look outside your window

Picked fence or barb wire

Are your hands already raised?

 Oh well then raise them higher

I may be five six but I swear I feel like I’m six eight

Now let my words be like a switch blade to a haters ribcage

Never let anyone stop you from heading up

Just do you, shut them up

To all the haters I really just want to say thanks

Because your hate is what gave me my strength

Thanks to you I am who I am now

Thanks to you other people will be strong now

And to all you haters who look down on me

I'm telling you now, I'm tearing down your balcony

To you reading this have no fear

To all you haters, get the freak out of here

For this generation I have great expectations

The haters have to go I dont care what it takes

A third world war or another revolution

Down with the negative up with the postivity

No more bad energy thats where this world needs to be

When I step out my house I want to see

Something that this world needs to be

Better. I want to see a world free of haters

Their rein is over

I want to see a world free of haters

 

 

Author's Note

This poem is now done! Haters in this piece stands for the people who are always negative, the people who tell you you cant do anything, and the people who always try to hold you back. I hope you like it and please give me some feed back:D

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

Impressive! Incredibly insightful for your age at the time. Extraordinary talent. Nice work!

[Sarah Nicole Nadler]

"It’s ok to live out your dreams"

I love this one. Do you rap, or only write? (if "only" and "write" can ever be in the same sentence!)

[Riddhi]

Well done!!! Yes its really true that despite of all haters you should do what you want ...
Very nice message...I really enjoyed reading this poem... Keep on writing and thanks for sharing....
Take care
Riddhi

[Taylor]

My wish for you is that you will be surrounded by love and then more love. This is very well spoken, an important and inspiring message. You will make a better world for those you touch will know a noble spirit. Bravo!

[luvingu01]

I luv it. It is a message that this world should embrace. forget the ignorance of other people and let live you'll find the world easier to bear.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Well done Smarie. You are right on. You would have been happy in the commune I lived in back in the sixties. I am glad to hear you are pro positive. I wrote a story about someone named Abbadar. He is the one who brings everyone together in a positive way. The story is called " The Shipwreck of the Phaloes 7 " I have placed 8 of the chapters here. You can get a sense of him in the first chapter. You remind me of him. Perhaps he can guide you to bring your generation together for a positive greatness.

[Sorry Sits Here]

"Keep climbing till you reach the top", "Don’t worry about the haters cause for them it’s going to be a scary drop" I really like these lines. Perfectly stated. I fully believe with everything you have said in this poem. Down with the haters! haha. Great write...

[dreaming dame]

:) Wonderful! lol I'm 5'5" :)

[alegria]

hey was nice:)) keep writin...:)))love ur wrk:)

[M.E.Lyle]

Back in the dark ages of heavy metal rock, the DOORS had a song out; I can't remember the name, but it had a line that went "Break on through to the other side." I see you here, breaking through the wall of negativity and crossing over into the land of the possitive. Good luck, and remember you'll only go as far in life as you allow yourself to go; keep thinking possitive, be strong, never quit. Gee, I sound almost like a coach.