Rose Cadence

Solitude stroke 

On a brush of hope

Peace for a soul

Covenant bonds

Stories do tell

A Venice 

The quality of threads

Jolting embrace

Though anger subsides

Shinning to a well

He looks into her

Witnesses little

Inside a cave

Gifts she left hanging

Silk of traded paths

Woven in good will

Though simple

and few

Unfolded grew ample

Stars spread to a carpet

Furnishing a thought

In the brink 

Secrets she wrote

He may have swayed by

Seldom noticing

A spark in her eyes

Telling records 

The shone shells

Whispering his name

A light wishful token

Streets of a man

Hung onto the hide

Raving in subtle vibes

A right to feel alive

In bearing the truth of her

To him

Resolute comfort

Looking at peace  

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice flow of words. I liked the journey leading to nice ending. Good to seek peace and if lucky. Find peace. Thank you Jess for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Annie Nicole]

I found this to be very enchanting and filled with emotion. Very good writing! : )

[Nisreen]

Thank you Annie

[Emily]

I really like the layout and the title!
Keep up the great work!!

[Nisreen]

Thank You Emily

[Einstein Noodle]

love that pic ...pretty bodacious in itself! a man needs to pay attention to small seemingly innocuous hints and clues doesn't he ...many a pearl has been lost as a result ;{ and she ... well many a man has been lost for lack of a little boldness on her part eh!? i love your story (at least that is some of how i read it) you always pack whole dreams in each line :)
E.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much E

[Joshua Haines]

Great words. I do love reading your work. It was also a easy nice read. What is best for a poem good work

[Nisreen]

Thank you Joshua

[hcarson]

Lovely words, hopeful, sad, wistful..u name it u managed to exoress it 😊

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your review

[Inject Positivity]

You have very well combined both the melancholic memories of the past along with the hope for a reunion with the lady's love... Each stanza containing so much meaning and it is so beautifully portrayed... A poem that tells a story...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Nisreen]

Thank you Dhiman

[Chrys Marie]

Well-written in a unique style, blending pain with love in such beautiful lines. Great job.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much Chrys

[B-poet]

Loved the poetic form and the overall message. Great work. :)

[Nisreen]

Thank you very much

[andrew mitchell]

my initial thoughts; she has fond memories on a relationship finished while he was oblivious to it all. a sad write with glimpses of hope or dreams of reuniting. a dreamy sad write.

[Nisreen]

Thank You Andrew .... The smile always find a way through

[andrew mitchell]

Eventually YES! :)