Bloodthirsty

Bloodthirsty

 

tonight speaks of

many fevered dreams,

 

but we chose this

mighty shelter's safety;

 

as outside, it bites

at the tail of anything...

 

for nothing is sacred

to the bloodthirsty

 

5-2-08

 

Reviews

[Natalie C]

I will have to agree with Robert this was such a uniquely different piece, loved the different dimension you brought to the things that bite. As always I am a huge fan of your works, you just seem to have this talent of saying so much in so little words. Not anybody can get away with that, that is why you are such a brilliant writer.

Very eerily dark piece with an interesting end, leaving open so many possibilities for your readers.
I loved it

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Hell yah those damn blood suckers! haha

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

How true this is demons, who they may be are always thirst and prey on the weak, lonely and lost. Good write james.

[Clarisse Nanoit]

"for nothing is sacred to the bloodthirsty"
Ha. Ain't that truth?! lol. I know ppl who might be considered "blood thirsty".
You're an amazing poet with your short but meaningful bits. This is lovely.
KH

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This poem is different but dark and intense. I like it, great job!!!

Heather

[Fran Marie]

A dark and intense piece wonderfully penned in few words~Fran Marie

[Robert Luna]

Truly an interesting piece. I love the flow of thought and the purposeful way you wrote this. Such a heavy story that this piece leaves resting in my head. Imagining the most horrible of things. I truly enjoy when someone can cause my thoughts to be come crowded with thoughts I had not had before i read the piece. Taking my imagination to somewhere I had not thought of venturing myself. You really left a haunting thought in my mind and gave me enough to capture a story on my own.


Well Done!!!!!!

[An Ordinary Woman]

Oh I like it, very nice descriptives leaving me wanting more. Very nice!

[mick weller]

that `mighty shelter` (?)
cool
left guessing again... what bites?
...tonight is blood thirsty and bites at the tail...
love it - it's like a puzzle
cheers

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Short and sweet....I love it.

The first lines are my favorite. Reminds me of a dragon on the prowl in the wee hours of the morning.