My Last Day On Earth

The formation of living kinds starts from a huge flood and the end is also will be a flood

Water uprising

Up on the banks plains valleys

And the mountain top

Where I go

 

Rain rain everywhere

Termoil Tsunami Strom

Melting ice mountains

Where I go

 

Falling down the trees

Of concrete and

Collapsed pyramids

Where I go

 

Endless rotation

Weakened the foots

Mom stopped everything

Where I go.

Reviews

[Lucky Bardwal]

Really Lovely writing!
I like whole poem.
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too Anguish and She..
God bless you..
Lucky!

[MariannaBeavis]

Vivid images can come with such simple words, and you did an amazing job at demonstrating that.

[ShameemAkhtar]

Very interesting read,

But I failed to grasp the meaning your last four lines...

Endless rotation
Weakened the foots
Mom stopped everything
Where I go.

I would really like to hear from you on that... :)

[Tai]

Nicely written, and I like the mental images that it put in my head. I like the image too :) Keep writing, you're good at it :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Splendid lush imagery, I like that :)

[sarah]

This is a really interesting write!

[Imagination-mage]

this is very deep, what inspired u?

[Sophster300]

Wow! Wonderfully written. Well done! :)

[I Cast a Shadow]

Grammatical error: line 4: *Where

Same on line 15 in stanza 4: *stopped

Interesting poem. I love mythology. The flood story never gets old. They only major mythology without a flood story that I know of is Norse Mythology. They end the world with fire; Ragnorak.

[Marie Harrison]

Nice! I can see it now!