If you need

If you need

A Poem by Killer
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A little somethin i wrote for my friend

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If you need me i shall be there

if you need a hand i shall give you a hand

If you need money I shall give you money

There is nothing i would not give you

Only you shall reget everything you've done

Nothing will help you

Now that you've lied,stole,and killed

For what you now deasr is death

© 2011 Killer


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A excellent poem. Brought me in with kindness. Ended with disappointment. I needed one of these poem this morning.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think its really good. It caught me of guard I actually thought it would be straight forward about being friends. I like the twist.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 30, 2009
Last Updated on October 25, 2011
Tags: Sad Cold Loveing


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