Strangly Friends

The beginning was attractive. And the description of the characters was alright, the ending was interestingly confusing. There were several noticable spelling and gammar mistaks. You've got good material of thoughts an stories in your head, but you just need to focus on the language accuracy. Maybe do a little reading here and there? All in all nice short story. Let us know if there's any updates. Thanks for sharing.

-Wella.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Pretty interesting intro to a story or even a book. I really like how you introduce your characters in this! Bravo!

Posted 13 Years Ago

The beginning was attractive. And the description of the characters was alright, the ending was interestingly confusing. There were several noticable spelling and gammar mistaks. You've got good material of thoughts an stories in your head, but you just need to focus on the language accuracy. Maybe do a little reading here and there? All in all nice short story. Let us know if there's any updates. Thanks for sharing.

-Wella.

Posted 13 Years Ago