The Divine Of A Rose

The Divine Of A Rose

A Poem by Ryan Daniels

The sun shining bright

Showing from that height

The things that perish

Right in front of our sight.


Teaching detachment

And hold on to my inner light

To help with my next life.


This moment I need to grow 

And taking this time to feed my soul

Asking to turn this seed into a rose

From the spring water that God holds.








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A very typical Ryan Daniels poem if I may say so... A verse about enlightenment, elucidated by beautiful metaphors of the sun and the rose...
The first stanza reminded me of Gautama Buddha's philosophy of "Kshanabhangavada", i.e the ephemeral nature of all material things...
I loved the expression "feed the soul" and the lines that followed speaking of the journey from a "seed" to a "rose"...
Spiritual and splendidly so!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Pretty and holy. Keep it up. Great rhythm.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this poem is very ncie and peceful.. if that is the right word. but all in all this is a very good peom. Its very beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A peaceful and enlightening write! I really enjoyed it.
I love the rhymes thrown in and vivid-detail you display in so few lines.
Great work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very typical Ryan Daniels poem if I may say so... A verse about enlightenment, elucidated by beautiful metaphors of the sun and the rose...
The first stanza reminded me of Gautama Buddha's philosophy of "Kshanabhangavada", i.e the ephemeral nature of all material things...
I loved the expression "feed the soul" and the lines that followed speaking of the journey from a "seed" to a "rose"...
Spiritual and splendidly so!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This somewhat reminds me of a prayer.
Unfamiliar with your style, but I like it.
~Gage

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wonderful piece:)
An enlightened soul! Great poem
xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


The most perfect creation from God is the Rose- this is a great write Ryan.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Ryan Daniels
Ryan Daniels

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I am a poet that likes to write about spirituality that is up lifting to the heart. I have published two poetry books! I read books from the Baha'i Faith because I am a Baha'i and enjoy creating in th.. more..

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