Darkside

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I fear so much right now about the things that I will be into
The troubles and fears I see
The troublesome doubt
The danger that lurks in the corners of the minds of others
The desire that something they want from you
The pleasure they seek of unspoken truth
What is your greatest fear is just human
And I fear myself getting into something dark if I tasted blood
Blood that will make myself evil
A damage soul can be very deadly
A drink of its pure evil soul
The darkness of fear itself

Author's Note

every human has a dark side to protect
to handle it out-most care
to keep it down
to settle it down
i fear to be alone in this country
I don't want to be succumb in my bad nature
People are capable of being bad or doing good
It's the balance of nature
I fear of something you hold so dear will be taken away
I fear the balance of my nature will be in chaos
To much pain can create something evil
Something so sinister that will do anything to come out

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ive wrote this after watching nightbreed by clivebarker
a wonderful storyline
and also after listening to what will happen to me if i go alone
to renew my passport if I'm not careful....
i may say rumors of what so ever...
I don't want to be vengeful...
the photo is mine... it was about to rain that day...

Reviews

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

I'm a HUGE fan of Clive Barker. He is one of my favorite authors who influenced my writing. The truth is, everyone does have a darkside. My darkside runs through my dark ficition writing, and I'm sure yours too. Nevertheless, this is awesome work you have here, Pax. Unleash yuor darkside through your words for which you write!!!!

[Pax]

for me I admire his talents my friend... he can write and paint his vision in his writes...don't you know he posted his painting in Devaintart.com...
i say he has a great imagination...you can see it in his writes and his paintings too... Simply a admirable talent...
and about the darkness.... yes we have it all, its a matter of balance...
thank you my friend.

[Baby Ricochet]

Some powerful words Mr Pax. I do know a thing or two about the evil that can crawl out of you when you're stressed, frightened, exhausted and in pain. THis is a brilliant write that I understand all to well. THank you for creating it and posting it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

hate destroys, it destroys the one who hates It just builds and builds and there is no way out. Thank you for this one Pax.

[Pax]

always its great to hear your thoughts... oh too much hate that builds... makes our well being unbalance... making dreadful and fearful situation thats is hard to control....
thank you my friend

[Pax]

Yes again here dear, such a poignant and honest write.... yes we all have a dark and darker site. You're so true... but never be afraid of this, face it, see it, and vent it.... like it's healing you learned me that! and I'm grateful of it. We all are humans and do the best we can. And indeed you're right to be careful, but do not ever make yourself things wise, for wich you don't had seen or explored them by yourself first. Balance my soul. If you do good, you will receive good... and that's how it works... excellent write !

E.L.

[Pax]

we learned from each other dearest friend... I'm grateful your around to remind me... I must not be fearful and explore, take some risk... be ourselves and all that must inject careful for its a harsh world out there...
thank you....

It is a harsh mad world yes, but by being the same it gets only worse... So being your beautiful self makes cc changes xx ;)

Sorry for the two cc autocorrect.... @___@

[Marie]

What a beautiful photo.

You are right to be careful. But not to be fearful. I think good surrounds you like a charm.

[Pax]

oh thank you so much my friend Marie...
I must be careful i agree... for the world is not always the safest place...i see that and you made me realized that as well in our talks...so thank you, thank you....i hope that charm will not draw bad people around...but we never know right, we must face it without fear and erase the doubt...

[Boy of the red]

"a damaged soul can be very deadly" my favorite line. this is a great write Pax!

[Pax]

thank you my friend Red.... I'm glad you liked it..

[Jem Sagcal]

I loved every bit of it. I love the thrill you placed in this.

For some reason, I imagined a vampire haha.

[Pax]

Kabayan it's always a pleasure to hear from you...
Salamat.... oo nga noh... di ko napansin yun ah..pwde!
pero alam mo nman segoro yun dugo metaphor for something more sinister my friend...

[Jem Sagcal]

Of course, of course. Bigla lang ako napaisip ng bampira HAHA.

And you're really one good writer, Kuya Pax :D

[Pax]

hehe... salamat... kaw rin naman eh... ako wala pa doon but i"m taking all the learning i can get...never to late to learn diba...

[Lonely Islander]

dark sides are damn scary.....and to keep it safe and hidden is even more scary... really a great piece of writing and a beautiful photo:-):-):-D.

[Pax]

thank you my friend... they are indeed scary if out of balance...

[Lonely Islander]

Your welcome:-):-):-D.

[Kuhr Gred]

hahaha.. anyone has a darkside.. :) i like it.. GREAT WRITE ;)
- Kuhr Gred

[emman]

Yes even I has it all..well,dark sides could be a motivational factor to walk forward into the bright side/s