Promises, promises!

sojourn-WOTD#2

Love’s promises came,

sojourned till the climate changed

The photos are nice

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

I like the last line, this is a good write

[Wondering Mind]

Thanks again :)

[Pax]

haha ~ sad but the ending was epic fun!

[icaros13]

I fell mad in love
indifference is cruel
there is no photo...

[patricia]

for a little while...and a photo left as calling card. you say much in three lines. a familiar experience for many I'm sure. Still the photo's help sometimes.

[Mockingbird]

photos for me would be good memories a love that ran its course. looking back at these photos captures all the good moments once shared.

[FJ Davis]

Reality is: Not happily ever after--only, for as long as it lasts.
(Though, I much prefer the way you said it.)
Other than the very apt title, a gloriously understated piece--one that could, quite possibly, be dripping with sarcasm.
In any event, WM, this poem is a concise word-painting; beautifully portraying romantic melancholy

[Michael X]

I enjoy the way you are able to express a memory, it intels heart touching
feature and takes the reader to a place treasured in heart, or love
that once blossomed, then the season has passed, but the thought
will always remain, you are a talented, classical poet ^_^

[JelliFyshKissUs]

lol! I know this is sad, but that ending tickled me. The love of many today is very short-lived indeed. Bravo.

[paul]

the difference in the last line makes this poem

[Bare Bohemian]

Pictures can be a blessing and a curse. Especially if the climate refers to the end of a relationship.