Red Relief

WOTD # 9 & 10

like annealing does

heat-up till relief, then cool

skin may stay florid

Author's Note

I've never tried it

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

I like this write, has wonderful imagery in it, awesome....

[Pax]

sun-bathing ~ i don't get florid but i get darker, tried it ~ and didn't much like it though... if it's too much it gets burn and painful...

[Michael X]

skin may stay florid, the image of the idea is abstract and artistic,
draws the reader to ponder the ultimate depth of the meaning.

[Mockingbird]

i guess that's that's the price to pay when you stay out in the sun too long and you're fair skinned.

[Ruth]

I love this, a great using of the word :) xx

[Geralyn Miller]

Two words, one senryu, first one, nice work. Fun form, isn't it?

[Norma M Sutton]

I like it :)