patient is the night

Along the fields of straw and stover

Clocked in 'til the work day's over

Time’s a gentle stream, longer than it seems

Patient is the night

How I long to see her face now

Her starry moonlit gaze now

I know she’s never late, still anxiously I wait

Patient is the night

I know she's never late, still anxiously I wait

Patient is the night

Reviews

[EJ's Horror]

I love the way you complexed the simple rhymes! Forgive me I know 'complexed' is not a word.

[MeathooksMcGee]

Dude! I never say this to writers on here because there is a lot of stupid crap...

But Payton, this is gold bro!

[Stan Lee]

What a great poem. I love the repetition. Your poem evokes a sense of calm. Thank you for sharing. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words and thoughts. I did like them. Patient is the night and some nights can last forever. Thank you Peyton for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

patient is the night,we wait for the moon and stars ,cloaked in her beauty