My valentine

My valentine

A Poem by wordman
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My darling

we`ve been together for

forty one years


we`ve shared laughter

and we`ve shared our tears

but together we stand


we have lost some

on our way,but we know

we will see them again one day


you captivated my heart

years ago, with your smile

and your eyes a glow


and all these little faces

we see running around

it was our love that brought

them around


so my darling

one more year,one more time

I wish you a happy valentines...


© 2017 wordman



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this brought tears into my eyes... i want to spend this with my love.

and all these little faces
we see running around
it was our love that brought
them around

Awwww, Word. I want to have babies... :)

Happy valentine's day.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you very much mirror,
Happy Valentine's Day from me too. To such a lasting and sweet love. Appreciated so very much!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for reading my friend
Congratulations on such a successful marriage and what a beatiful Valentine to wrap the two of you in :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you very much !
i really like it :) its so sweet

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you ! are you an aries like me?
Aries

1 Year Ago

unfortunately no, its my actual name!
This is such a sweet tribute Ron. (can I rip it off for Otto's card and just change 41 to 21?) No really just joking, but I do like it.. very heartfelt.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you ! and yes you can
Awe this is amazing!!!! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the visit !
a beautiful Valentine write, Ron... well-done

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit my friend
A beautiful Valentine! Nicely done Ron!

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you jane

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