Sweet Dreams { a duet with Micky }

Sweet Dreams { a duet with Micky }

A Poem by wordman
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Last night in my dreams

we made love,for the first time

it was special

not like any one before


Your sweet lips on mine

the feel of your soft skin

your gentle touch

as your body slides closer in time


Our bodies so close I feel your heart racing

playing and touching slowly caressing

I hear your soft moans in my ear

I whisper for you to trust me


Feeling your hand searching I move my

lips down to your neck

slowly moving my hands

slowly...

© 2016 wordman


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Great blending of inks -- a sensuous delight :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

lol,thank you
Tiana

7 Years Ago

:) my pleasure
7th place? At 947 views I'd say this poem got 1st place with the popular reading list. The people have spoken & this poem won. Outstanding sir!

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you !
I love this song, which is often playing in the back of my mind when I'm writing something sensuous. I love the slow, steady, sensuous dance in your message much more than raw intensity or verbal acrobatics, where the topic of lovemaking is concerned. Those seeking to go "higher & higher" often burn out & move on, whereas this steady approach is often more lasting. I also prefer a sensual message that is open-ended, becuz everyone envisions the details differently, so this doesn't thrust your preferences on the reader. Nicely imagined & written (((HUGS)))

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you very much,yes you are right,let everyone have there own impression
and you must be .. read more
7 th place in the co writers contest

Posted 7 Years Ago


I could feel the emotion."your gentle touch. Our bodies so close Feeling your hand searching I move my." Goes well with the video. Good job

Posted 8 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

thank you !
as your body slides closer in time---I expected..closer to mine...what I got was closer in time...LOVE that line. It was an unexpected gem.

Thanks for the lovely read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

8 Years Ago

thank you pandora for the visit
Badabing! Such passionate words and intimately detailed
To the the bones. Well done! A cool collaboration indeed.
Thanks for sharing Mr. Word.

Posted 8 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

thank you eg
Very tender moments with romantic images that flow through this write;] Beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

ols micky did a great job,thank you
that was so tender and very romantically described.. you actually made me imagine the face expressions and how they channge. well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

thank you for the visit,havent seen you lately
stars are far

8 Years Ago

yeah ive been trying to figure out some suff away from my computer and yeah i figuredout lots
 wordman

8 Years Ago

hope it`s better now
This reminds me of Conway Twitty's song "Slow Hand". You probably know the words to it. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

he covered it from this group,micky just came and left i guess..thank you

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Added on June 24, 2015
Last Updated on July 26, 2016

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 wordman
wordman

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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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