Could you imagine

Could you imagine

A love so simple

So sweet

Gathering only the rarest of flowers

Making sure each flower is filled with nothing more then their love

Could you imagine

Holding that love in the palm of your hand

Never to let it go as long as both of you live

Making certain that even if the slightest bit goes wrong

You can catch it again and everything will blossom as it should

Could you imagine

Watching the things that you both loved about each other

Grow in the being you've created from your love

Her smile, eyes and silky brown hair

His laugh, chiseled chin and the structure of a statue

Could you imagine

Growing old, becoming the rarest flower

Being picked up by the next two lovers

Who only wish to have a love like yours

Praying for a love so simple yet so sweet

Could you imagine.

Reviews

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

Anonymous, what a simple but intense piece. In the simplest way this pieces just shook up my emotions.
I am embracing grief on a daily basis like a chore and love has squashed me as if a bug. I hide them well before I leave my home each day. "Could you Imagine" has with a few brief words has exposed both. Beautiful use of words. Can you catch it again and will everything blossom as it should? or is it just a once in a lifetime thing ?
Sheer Terror

[XO Vee]

You went deep into the piece and feedback/comments like this are what I wait for. I love you analysis on this whole piece....makes even me think more in depth about it! thank you !

[HC Abiona]

this is absolutely beautiful... Talk about wanting to find a love like that

[Sky Writer]

Love this :) Felt like there are so many memories hidden in the poem and how smoothly time moved along the stanzas until the end.

[Inject Positivity]

A very touching write, the concept is very interesting... Love is such a joyful feeling, whether it is between two frnds or lovers... The last part of the poem is very thought provoking, and you have pointed out some vital aspects... Love is never easy but there remains a simplicity within it too if we hold is softly and with care... Great work frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[XO Vee]

Thank you my Friend

[grayscale]

I am rather jealous of how good of a writer you are, i can imagine ;), all of what you said and i love the imagery, a wonderful read, thank you for sharing this piece i look forward too more.

[XO Vee]

Thank you so much for the comment

[Anjali]

Hey Nony,

Simple, elegant, heart touching and beautifully crafted poem. It made me imagine the beauty and essence of love the one which could last forever. Thank you for sharing this with me :)

[XO Vee]

Thank you for your comments

[mattavelli]

Hello, Anonymous! :)
This is a lovely poem. I'll have my wife read it. Maybe she will be nicer to me.

[XO Vee]

thank you and maybe that might happen just maybe

[Ruth]

This is so beautiful, both in thought and sentiments, a really incredible poem that shows love in such a graceful manner :)

[Riley Justine]

This is a beautifully written piece. Very simple and yet very powerful. Your poem really provokes emotions, whether it be of longing, regret, love, or reminiscence. Very well written!

[Jibey]

Frankly, I can't imagine it! This is a highly romantic view of love, the stuff of romance novels and popular songs. It bears little relation to reality but is just a wishful dream!

[Bala Gorthi]

I like the content of this one and the way you have brought it out.
A very nice poem, all the sections are very beautiful.the last one is my favourite.
Keep it up and thanks for sharing this.
Very well done,Nony...