Could you imagine

Could you imagine

A Poem by XO Nonie

Could you imagine
A love so simple
So sweet
Gathering only the rarest of flowers
Making sure each flower is filled with nothing more then their love
Could you imagine
Holding that love in the palm of your hand
Never to let it go as long as both of you live
Making certain that even if the slightest bit goes wrong
You can catch it again and everything will blossom as it should
Could you imagine
Watching the things that you both loved about each other
Grow in the being you've created from your love
Her smile, eyes and silky brown hair
His laugh, chiseled chin and the structure of a statue
Could you imagine
Growing old, becoming the rarest flower
Being picked up by the next two lovers
Who only wish to have a love like yours
Praying for a love so simple yet so sweet
Could you imagine.

© 2016 XO Nonie



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Anonymous, what a simple but intense piece. In the simplest way this pieces just shook up my emotions.
I am embracing grief on a daily basis like a chore and love has squashed me as if a bug. I hide them well before I leave my home each day. "Could you Imagine" has with a few brief words has exposed both. Beautiful use of words. Can you catch it again and will everything blossom as it should? or is it just a once in a lifetime thing ?
Sheer Terror

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

XO Nonie

11 Months Ago

You went deep into the piece and feedback/comments like this are what I wait for. I love you analysi.. read more



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this is absolutely beautiful... Talk about wanting to find a love like that

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love this :) Felt like there are so many memories hidden in the poem and how smoothly time moved along the stanzas until the end.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very touching write, the concept is very interesting... Love is such a joyful feeling, whether it is between two frnds or lovers... The last part of the poem is very thought provoking, and you have pointed out some vital aspects... Love is never easy but there remains a simplicity within it too if we hold is softly and with care... Great work frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

XO Nonie

11 Months Ago

Thank you my Friend
I am rather jealous of how good of a writer you are, i can imagine ;), all of what you said and i love the imagery, a wonderful read, thank you for sharing this piece i look forward too more.


Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

XO Nonie

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the comment
Hey Nony,

Simple, elegant, heart touching and beautifully crafted poem. It made me imagine the beauty and essence of love the one which could last forever. Thank you for sharing this with me :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

XO Nonie

11 Months Ago

Thank you for your comments
Hello, Anonymous! :)
This is a lovely poem. I'll have my wife read it. Maybe she will be nicer to me.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

XO Nonie

11 Months Ago


thank you and maybe that might happen just maybe
This is so beautiful, both in thought and sentiments, a really incredible poem that shows love in such a graceful manner :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautifully written piece. Very simple and yet very powerful. Your poem really provokes emotions, whether it be of longing, regret, love, or reminiscence. Very well written!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frankly, I can't imagine it! This is a highly romantic view of love, the stuff of romance novels and popular songs. It bears little relation to reality but is just a wishful dream!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the content of this one and the way you have brought it out.
A very nice poem, all the sections are very beautiful.the last one is my favourite.
Keep it up and thanks for sharing this.
Very well done,Nony...

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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