Death

Death

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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A late night scrawl.. I don't know what this is....

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Death... 
I wish it was as easy to die 
As it is to sleep 
That we could lie down 
And have our souls taken 
This mortal shell the only thing remaining 
To be buried and forgotten 
But some may say 
Sleeping isn't easy 
Their sleepless nights spent 
Waiting for sleep to come 
So is it easy to die 
Or fall asleep 
I know neither 
As I wait for sleep to come



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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very nicely written.
You are right, at times sleep is not easy to come. There can be nothing more distressing then tossing and turning in bed and hoping to fall asleep.
Death is definitely painful but no one has returned to relate their experience about it.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes I agree! Thank you for the nice review and for liking :)



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Im sorry, but you will never be able to die, in hands of mine

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

well we all will one day..
This is unique. Sleep or death? Dying in bed - kill two birds with one stone.
Pure musings that we can all relate to YumnaKay

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Tony for the nice review! It means alot ☺
I loved this.. Its very deep...

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much for liking and reviewing! It means alot ☺
very nicely written.
You are right, at times sleep is not easy to come. There can be nothing more distressing then tossing and turning in bed and hoping to fall asleep.
Death is definitely painful but no one has returned to relate their experience about it.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes I agree! Thank you for the nice review and for liking :)
Sleep is but a mini death with shorter dreams or longer nightmares. I like this, YK. Must have been a long night studying that prompted the write. Good job.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Ah no.. It was a long day at the beach what was a friends' hangout that prompted this 😂
S.. read more
Same here ... Very true n heartfelt writing..... ^_^

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thats very kind of you ☺
Uday Bhasuthker

11 Months Ago

:) nope its magic of ur work that took attention
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Well thank you ☺
Very interesting piece indeed.
Allot of thoughts going through your head there while writing this it seems.
I am one of those people who doesn't find getting to sleep easy at all, it is super annoying.
In a way it kind of is easy to die when you think about it, so many things can kill you...
Spiders...
bees: if you are allergic
Car accidents, shootings.... anything really.
Anyway great write, thanks for sharing your poem and thoughts with the rest of us.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

11 Months Ago

I loooove coffee as well. I try not to drink it as night now, its pretty hard haha.
Your mos.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Hah well yes but I've to study alot for which coffee is the only option to stay active :D
cimmy wuv xxxooo

11 Months Ago

Haha true :p
Very nice piece.I like the connection you made. Some people wish to die in their sleep because they believe its the easiest and painless but how can we know if no one lived to tell.

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you for the interesting insight! Really appreciate it.. Glad you liked ☺
Well, I feel sleeping is easier :) Did tried all these sorts of things. Climped up high on the building but didnt jumped, tried to drown myself, sleeping pills and few other things. People use to tell cyanide give easy death...

But only one beautiful morning did I realized that life is a gift and rather let me struggle as this is just a drama we all play.

Good work again, Thanks.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Indeed life is a gift.. I realized this during one of my sleepless nights 😂
Thank you for.. read more

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