Lust & Lullabies

Lust & Lullabies

As my broken fingers linger over her haunted skin
I remove her love twice from within
I bite her flesh and taste her sin
I insert my damnation deep into her shattered dreams
she stains my mind with her serrated screams
drowning her tainted doom is lost esteem
soaking her wounded soul in blood and cream
her lust and lullabies are not as they seem
she quivers and whispers in my ear... "hell is near"
I move deeper into her tears... "you only have me to fear"
                                     An angel's holocaust
                                     All love is lost
I place my scarred lips below her pale hips
she pulls back as her youth rips
echoes out hollow moans as her love drips
her body heaves in forgot bliss
as I try to maintain her virgin exorcist
she calms down and accepts my final kiss

--Z.Silas Herrera

Reviews

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Awesome imagery...very nice! 'I bite her flesh and taste her sin". I love that!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

An instant fav I could feel the passion beautifully dark and erotic and a little sadomasochistic which I love.
"Made me long for the first pleasurable pain of penetration the sting of love". That is a line from one of my poems called The sting of Love I think you might like it. I hope to be ravaged like that one day and yes I'm still a Virgin hence the name VirginPoet

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very strong poem.. sensual and somewhat a bit wicked.
Really like the title too .. nice poem.

Chloe
xoxo

[Sara Searchefield (The ..]

So much Passion! So much Power! Wow! That must have felt good just to write on paper before it exploded within you! Good job...

[Brianna Brie]

Alright this one is the whole reason that I stayed so long on your page. Mind rivoting writing. The picture you paint with your words is so vivid.

[Rooney]

You are, you must be, an apprentice of Poe.
That was f*****g incredible.
well done.
And you, you indeed are a great writer.

[October]

Whoa.
I love this.
It's dark and powerful.
Good job.

[Damien Dsoul]

You might as well drive a nail through my wrist for me to grasp the feel of this haunting poem of yours. It's haunting and scaring, the insinuated thoughts are, more like a sadomasochistic delight gone bad.

[Bethany Woody]

Nice. Very sensual and erotic. That first initiation into umm sexual knowledge is sometimes hard to understand for some women, especially if they are young. I think you did a wonderful job of telling the fears she might feel/did feel(if this is true life experience). The wording you choose seems almost like a raping. Like you are stealing her innocence from her, instead of her giving it freely. I still like the piece despite this. It is nicey wrtitten and flows very well.