Brian D. Billie

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanks so much for a second, thoughful and through review.
You're not the first to ask about this bit, so i must need to clarify better:

"Get the f**k out
of my contentment. You know
where you can shove your envy.

It isn�t my fault you feel guilty,
each dainty foot you tread upon
accidentally." - the narrator doesn't care about anyone and is content that way. the doctors are prying into it as lack of conscience; narrator reads it as envy. Maybe it is envy; i don't know.

Yeah, i'll need to re-examine those lines and see if i can fix the problem.
Thanks again for your thoughts and help.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Hey - thanks for reading part I, i appreciate it.
Your review's good - you've actually read the poem and spoken about it.

Thanks again.

Posted 17 Years Ago

I shalt read that, the park view one, and anxiety in the morn.

Sleep Yoda needs now.

Posted 17 Years Ago

You did good tonight. I listened in, and even called in at one point and read something. Your voice made the piece you read very powerful and the images very vivid. I did want to read it though, so what was the name again? Also, congrats on the feature.

Posted 17 Years Ago

You are very kind, my freind, thank you for the wonderful review of "The Map of Morning"!

*hugs*
Sarah

Posted 17 Years Ago

Okay then.
I'm appeased :-)

Lol.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Ohno - i'm just one of your many followers!

Wish i'd discovered you by accident.

Sorry.

But good that your writing will recieve overdue attention.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Hokay, no worries.
"Sort it out"? Making you very busy...or are you reluctantly featured?

Posted 17 Years Ago

Just reviewed two of your poems and read one of your (poetic) stories, and would like to applaud your talent.
Do you mind if i add you as a friend?

Posted 17 Years Ago

Very nice, the list of things in your bio. is something I feel very strongly about. Looking forward to reading your work. ~ Judi :-)