We should talk again! I get on only at school now! Im really busy and ya. thursdays are good when its A.R.T. (acidemic resource time) Sometimes Seminar is too if i get a pass before there all gone! Thats a time to see teachers and do what you need to get done in a short amount of time (lol) Well talk to you later and ill check this before school tomorrow. Right now its Seminar! On Thursdays we dont start school till 9. So i have till around 8:55 on Thursdays!
I appreciate the comment on my Mario story. It was probably the most thought out comment I have received.
It dragged in the middle is a very valid complaint. In my defense, it was written for a class where I had a 10 page requirement, so I had to add a lot of extra elements to meet that. I would like to blame it all on that, but even considering how long it is, I wanted to make it longer because I missed a lot of extra stuff I wanted to talk about (water levels, etc.)
I also understand the argument can be made that it lacked a real point. My creative writing class was filled with too many convoluted plots and just plain stupid ideas. I wanted to avoid making it convoluted and I also didn't want a resolution because Mario will never get some grand enlightenment because he can never talk to his creator. This story is just about how cruel would it be to be a video game programmer that gives his creation consciousness?
Anyway, I'm not trying to argue your points because they were all valid and very true, but I just wanted to offer some responses to the subject. Have a great day.
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