Rain Storm

I enjoy reading various works and writing about any and everything. I recently stepped outside my confort zone and began writing what might be considered erotica. This genre is not the norm for me but I thought I might give it a shot.
I will be posting my first short erotic story. Your feedback and critique are very much welcomed. In order for me to fine tune my new writing genre I ask that everyone leave honest feedback and advice on what I may be doing right OR wrong.

Thanks in advance.