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About Me

I'm a writer from the suburbs of Chicago. I'm also the lead singer in a local punk band. I've writen poems, short stories, philosophy, screenplays, lyrics, etc... I joined to get inspired to write again. I really havn't written anything in two years and most of the stuff I've done since is on this site.


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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thanks for the comments, ehh, I know I tend to be a bit long winded when I write........especially my sentences, as you can see. I'm Blaze btw.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


yes. Bob's salcation is part 2 of the three part series.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


well I enjoyed it. It's just the tone of the narrarator seems a bit too mellow, true if you were aiming for someone who seems wholy devoted. I just feel a bit more life could be given to him.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


hey man thanks a bunch for your thoughts on my story I am Bob,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.