Thanks bunches for the review you gave on my story. I do admit, I didn't do much research on the setting I was trying to create. It was mostly a story that I wrote for me (mostly my opinions), so I guess that's why I overlooked some of the little bits that would've contributed to the storyline. Thanks though, I appreciate reviews like yours MUCH more than the ones that say "i enjoyed this peace" but give no advice.
Thanks for your review of "Cabron." I was indeed trying to capture a very pulp feel with a more modern, inner-city flavor, with one of my biggest influences in pulp literature being Dashiell Hammett. Any other similarities you perceived were unintentional and probably unavoidable, since, at this point, everything has pretty much been done. Thanks again.