Mackenzie Rice

I am pretty young and have been using writing for a long time as an escape. What I am really looking for it people to critic my writing. I all ready have a fan base that worship my writing. What I am looking for people to tell me what I am doing wrong so I can fix my writing.

I will be posting my series up eventually. However, currently I am working on fixing the first few stories. You can tell I wrote them a year before I really got into the series. They are slightly more choppy and not as flowing as the rest of the stories.