OK. Here be a second comment. I wouldn't worry so much as I don't have any. I think what I post is a bit too long for most people to bother with. That can be good. I don't like blowing smoke so I won't make hollow comments praising your work for the sake of being encouraging, but I am happy to give honest feedback if you like. What is your literary background/ ambitions/ interest? as I would be interested in your feedback on one of my stories, although it has mature content and probably not suitable for you to read. However it is from the perspective of a girl your age and I could be totally off the mark by how she thinks and talks. Anyway, I hope you have enjoyed your second comment.
Jessie, all your poems are wonderful. I wish I could write like that. Never, Ever Stop Writing. Read all you can, read others and stay in school...Never quit.
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