Julia

I am a native German and English is only my second language. Nevertheless I want you to rate with contructive critism just as you would do with a native speaker. It is not much help to get a 5 or a 3 or 1 and you don't know why.
Also not anonymously as a "guest". That sucks. I won't bite your head off if you don't like what I write, may your reason be that you don't share the same taste or belief or simply that you think my writing is utter crap. Just be honest.

The way I write is rather strange. I don't put a lot of thinking in poems while I write it down, only before (and sometimes not even that, it just splashes on the paper ..sort of) and sometimes after. Usually I leave it the way it is because the moment is captured. I should start redefining it though.

My work in German: differs from the one in English, the schematic as well as thematic is (at least to me) more largely ranged. But since putting up German lyrics makes no sense and I don't like the German forums I have found on the net so far I'll stick with you and hope you don't mind. :-D
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