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Please offer honest harsh criticism for my work. I want to hone my writing skills!

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Posted 8 Years Ago


I've been creating stories for as long as I can remember. In 5th grade I actually started writing them down. In 7th grade I started writing poetry. I dreamed for awhile about being a writer, but then I got busy and the dream sort of faded into the background. Now, I've rekindled that dream, and I'm practicing hard! So, I really want full-fledged criticism. I'm looking to hone my work. Tell me what you think! Be nit-picky! And if it's awful, say so!