Robert Grossklaus

Robert Grossklaus

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Rancho Cordova, CA
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Posted 7 Years Ago


Hi friend, I hope to see you back on the Cafe soon,
it would be great to read your new inspirations ^_^
Kindest Regards, Michael



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Posted 11 Years Ago


hi robert, thanks for joining my friends list,
i look forward to reading your work,
Happy Holidays to you and Your's, mike

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Writing Contest


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Posted 12 Years Ago


Thanks for the review!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


thank you for taking the time to read Bunny Blue~john

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Posted 12 Years Ago


interesting robert, thank you for your insight. peace.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


ahh but what of cliche'...and the capitalizing the first word is of no intent, it merely happens, i dont clean that up until/when and if it goes to a publisher no worries man, again i ask you what of cliche? Would you have told Walt Whitman or any of the other greats- cliche'- words are words, its how you put them together to dance!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you for your review. It was very helpful! I will go over the poem again and address these issues as soon as I rest up a bit. I love true constructive advice.

Also, I will return the favor very soon :)