Fiction Authors Forum New, in need of feedback

I'd like to get some post looked at by real critics, and not my friends who think I can't do wrong. I have enjoyed the writings I have read so far and it is giving me hope to continue writing. Can't wait to jump into this, reading and writing again like when I started.

Squid-pro-roe, I shall return the favor.

P.S. contrary to my name, these writings have nothing to do with religion, It's my last name.

Thanks! St. Peter