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Finally finding an active and popular group! Please read and review.

9 Years Ago


Let me say how nice it is to find an active and popular fiction group. My name is Monica and I'm new to the site and have been roaming around. I've seen many groups that haven't seemed to be active in years! I was starting to believe that this was a dead site. I'm glad I stumbled upon this group and I hope to make new friends and learn new things when it comes to writing. I really hope some of you will take the time to read the beginnings of my book and give me a few notes on how to better it. Creative criticism, comments and compliments are excepted greatly. 

I've uploaded the Prologue to my book The Sorceress. It will be the first of a series of books about the lives of the characters in it. This book is centered on a young girl, Jasmine, having grown up in the ghetto of 1700s England. She ran away after her mother decided that Jasmine would pay for her stay with her body. One day, she runs into a dark figure who takes her in and trains her to defend herself. She learns that there's more to life than running and she learns that there's more to herself than what she thought- she's a witch! Not only a witch, but she wasn't even born in England; she doesn't even belong in the human world!

Thank you for taking time to read my introduction of the book. I promise to read and review any fictional piece of whomever read and reviews my work. Just message me which piece you would like me to look at.

Monica