For All Those Teenage Writers Forum Like This Plot????

A teen named alice dracolynn ventures off into forbidden territory, only to find a towering archway, made out of a crystal that is cool to the touch. when she and her sister venture through this archway, they are transported to a different world. alices sister is missing when she awakens, and she sets of to find her. along with the help of a fox girl, an angel, and an overly powerful dog boy, she sets out to find her sister and uncover the dangerous plot of an evil group called the youko.

Sounds interesting and adventurous--I like it.  It seems like the kind of plot I would think up.

Whoa, too furry. I'd make the characters a bit more human. You know, so readers can relate. Or something like that. Otherwise, I think it sounds a bit generic. Plots involving girls named Alice being transported to other worlds aren't that scarce.

It sounds cool, but you'll have to make sure you fit a couple of plot twists in to stop it being to generic. Sounds great though :)