Honest feedback Forum Review Request

I have recently been working on a book called Phases of the Storm and I would really appreciate some pointers on my writing.  I have the next few chapters written, but I don't want to post them yet when I could edit and improve them.  However, I feel that would best be done by receiving some reviews on what is currently written.  It would be a great help if even only one person could read and review, whether if it's a "good job" or a "you could work on..."

Getting a notification is really encouraging!

Have a beautiful day,

MusicManiac