My Group :) Forum Feed my back....?

I'm fairly new to all of this.  I've never put this much of my stuff out there for other people to read, and I'd like to get a little more feedback on any of it.  Say something good, say something bad....say anything.  I'm looking for any advice I can get to be better, or worse, or better. Cheers

I will check it out for you latter :) I felt the same way when I started putting my work online. Its weird at first but you get an awesome feeling when people review your work and tell you how awesome it is. It makes my day when it happened to me. I will read some of your work ASAP :)