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Re: Moonlit Lake11 Years Ago
Cloud like a spectral fish/
Trailed beneath the moon/
Rippling with seduction/
Through the deep and blue lagoon/
Billowed deftly round the
mountains/
Eerie sprinklings of vapour/
Smoked teasingly over the surface/
Like a lover’s unfurling whisper/
Feebly clutching at shale and
shingle/
Desperate to spill onto the beach/
It’s hopeless voice sadly sighing/
“Beauty incarnate far out of
reach”
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Re: Moonlit Lake11 Years AgoThis is the first of two poems I have ever shared with people other than a close friend. I've decided to share a less personal one to start. Please tell me what you think of it, I need either a confidence boost or being told to stop basically x
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