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aakash01	the road 10 Years Ago the road i walked down this road, few days back as a child- my eyes were full of hope, and mind was simple and wild; so many hands came and touched me, calming my galloping heart so many beautiful eyes, tearing my ignorance apart; too many new feelings that, i was quite unable to hold- too many mysteries behind, that i could never unfold, n' too many hopes and dreams, too little knowledge of hurt- too many affection to those i could never become a part- threw me right off the road, wasted and broken everywhere, i begged for help, even cried; but no one seemed to care. i walk this road as a person, oh yes, yet again with my eyes open widely n' mind crippled with pain- now i see what was so foggy in that early morn- all those sweet flowers, this time, along with their thorn; all those soft hands, with their wrinkled bodies behind- all those sparkling eyes hiding a starving mind! i keep stumbling on my massacred dream i keep wishing had i been able to scream- but i keep walking, as when the new sun smiles- i see this road only, laid over a thousand more miles.... *covered up in fog and perhaps, stories untold-* *in need of a little warmth, frozen in cold!* *i can't help but walk straight ahead-* *there's nothing else in this world i can do instead!*
Aarea	Re: the road 10 Years Ago Very deep, very good. I like your word choice! Great description words, made me see what you were describing in my mind. I enjoyed reading this!
PJ	Re: the road 10 Years Ago Very nice. Enjoyed the visuals. Thank you for sharing. Good work!