reviews and ratings, coming your way! Forum Read Request

I'm MusicManiac!  I'm currently working on a book titled Phases of the Storm and would love if I could get some input on my most recent chapter (The Calm: Chapter Four).  While I want to continue posting new chapters, i want to make sure that I can improve as well.  Whether i it's "Hey, this is great!" or "I like the plot, but maybe you could work on..." I really like hearing what others think.  I know that some reviews in the past have helped me improve greatly!

Thanks,

MusicManiac