I got your message and took a look at your haikus... To me, the strength of a haiku lies in its images, and the power of these images to reveal or evoke... The ones you have seem to stop at the opinion you're trying to convey. A powerful haiku limits the amount of words so that we can be concerned with the sensuality of it, not its' concept... the best haikus then, also invoke a concept, but this should only be the secondary concern. If these are your first attempts at being poetic, and you've chosen the confines of the haiku, perhaps you should begin with some more free flowing approach... one without style and gets out what you want to say, how you want to say it. That is the bedrock of experience great poetry, is beginning free and then challenging and subjecting one's growing skill to traditional style.
Yep. I'm jess fine wit' a peace pipe cause I ain't the type ta hold a grudge. Well, ok I actually am but thass jess the way I am. But I ain't gonna do it this time.
Hehehheeeeeeee. Dang. Now thass an avatar. I done got scairt jess lookin' at that serious face an' all. How 'bout some poems Mr. Bull? Than I can start a puttin' mine back up an' we can have us a good ol' fashioned hoe-down.
haha because he it too pathetic too! hahaha i see you deleted all comments too lol! he seems to have fully cleaned out now! though i must say i am going to remove his scum of writing from from comments list.
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